I.
Open the gate:
outside, the woods are quiet
inside, the city's sound
Tickled by
wind impatient:
surprising joy
A bee's wings
buzz my ears
in honey sound
Stranger
across the street:
in a moment, we're one
Reason undone
by logic's law:
lay down and give me a kiss
I kissed you
but all I tasted
was chocolate
Drunk with night
the morning stars
sang each other's songs
II.
Life's a record;
the joy
is in a name
She wore the colors of earth:
her face a ring
her palms the warmth
Marathon miles
a century smiles:
she was only thirty
The dream ended
when time was creeping
out of sight
Orphans
laid her robe
in living earth
III.
I went for a walk
with God
in rapturous talk
A sermon on pity
is worthless if witty:
what does a good man feel?
Do we weep in joy,
or weep in pity?
Our soul is in the winter's grip
Embracing
the salted herb
I tasted the honeyed fruit
IV.
The water is shallow
the fields are fallow:
five hens came home to roost
The mists of pleasure
hide the treasure:
a land of dreams
Defiling desire:
her beauty
a train of youth
The stroll
of marriage:
two joined in weakness
V.
The earth
is where you've been before:
foundation of stone
Modest as cake
we walked
to the final day
Born into a world of joy:
the bones enwrapped,
an earthly toy
Beauty in ashes:
her laugh
emanates above
He repents
but do we joy
in his release?
Note: This is fiction; the narrator "I" is not myself personally. Written for Haiku Heights' 5/26/2012 prompt, "Joy." Also linked to dVerse. I was going to link it for the Saturday prompt because it started off on a similar theme, but then it got a bit too heavy for the theme, I thought.
Awesome series of haiku. Thank you for sharing. It is a joy to read these ones.
ReplyDeleteWOW WOW WOW.. this is the only words that I came across after reading each set... amazing!
ReplyDeleteLost in between, read it again,. I second Maharukh,. WOW!
ReplyDeletelove those last couple of stanzas...
ReplyDeleteExcellent series. Particularly liked the one about talking to God. I'm not a believer (in the traditional sense), but I've always wondered how a conversation with a omnipotent being would be like, how it would see everything.
ReplyDeletenice...some really great lines in this...love that orphans line...it stopped my reading to ponder it...and then again with Embracing
ReplyDeletethe salted herb
I tasted the honeyed fruit
great line that as well...love the story telling in this as well...nicely done sir...
Some very vivid images and encapsulated thoughts--joy has taken you many places here.
ReplyDeleteA lovely wander through the corridors of your mind. Yes, lovely!
ReplyDeletehaiku jedi, you are! lots of great lines & imagery
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku offering ~ I can't picked a fav part, they are all lovely ~
ReplyDeleteGrace
"Embracing
ReplyDeletethe salted herb
I tasted the honeyed fruit"...love, love, LOVE this line!
Excellent, the flow and the reflection the MC went throw. The description of the female was just awesome.
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i liked "life's a record" there is so much meaning. is a record, like a file? or like a computer file? or is a a recording, like movie, or a record, like a CD, and it's artistic? i guess it's all those things
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"Do we weep in joy, or weep in pity?" ... that line slid right off the tongue and made me think. I like your dedication to length here, nicely done.
ReplyDeleteexcellent haikus -- wow, it is totally loaded with images! I will need to revisit and reread again -- pondering! I like the format of the different stanzas -- interesting progression of I thru V -- beginning to ending! God and I!
ReplyDelete"the earth . . where you have been before" "foundation of stone"
dust to dust -- ashes released back into the world
heaven sent
Thanks!
i like them all but section II was my fav with her wearing the colors of earth and then time running out..the orphans..very moving write..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku with a touch of wistfulness...loved them :)
ReplyDeleteGreat lines :) love it!
ReplyDeleteLovely lovely!
ReplyDeleteParticularly lovely:
"A bee's wings
buzz my ears
in honey sound"
Lovely imagery!
Anna :o]
I like that 'Joy' is surprising...it can happen anytime anywhere spontaneously!
ReplyDeletePerfect ...
ReplyDeletebest joy ever