Powerful and expressed with great economy of language.
Excellent. Captures all that needs to be said, with silence enveloping what must be said.
oo excellent last line in this....it builds well to then but that last line cinches it for me...
dang...and broken it is at times...but walking always helps..excellently captured sir..
I loved this!
I view poetry as a kind of conversation, but on a different level, so feel free to write a comment or drop a few lines of verse in response.Also, please feel free to offer suggestions or edits that can improve the work. I won't take it personally. ;-)