Sunday, March 25, 2012

shadowed mystery

shadowed mystery
walking in silent footsteps
the halo of our broken soul


Photo copyrighted by James Rainsford, used with permission.


Written to the dVersePoet's prompt on 3/24/12, "Patterns, Pictures and Poems"


5 comments:

  1. Powerful and expressed with great economy of language.

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  2. Excellent. Captures all that needs to be said, with silence enveloping what must be said.

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  3. oo excellent last line in this....it builds well to then but that last line cinches it for me...

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  4. dang...and broken it is at times...but walking always helps..excellently captured sir..

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