Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Basho: "Frost-withered, ~ Melancholy bloom: ~ A flowery field"

My Translation

Melancholy bloom:
A flowery field

Original Japanese



Shimo-gare ni
Saku wa shinki no
Hana no kana


Frost withered/die in/at
Bloom melancholy/fretful/mood’s
Flower field how/alas!

“Shinki no hana” = “depressed flowers” is taken from a song with the line “the depressed flowers bloom every night.”

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